tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post1035192583354668467..comments2013-05-24T07:27:05.059+01:00Comments on UrbanPoet: A Favour of SleepUrbanPoethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13455428024315417194noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-70067506401256534322010-11-02T18:21:49.765+00:002010-11-02T18:21:49.765+00:00Beautiful and touching poem, enjoyed it very much ...Beautiful and touching poem, enjoyed it very much :)Short Poemshttp://www.marinelareka.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-58772728785928566202010-10-21T18:01:24.984+01:002010-10-21T18:01:24.984+01:00This is so beautiful! I really like your style. I...This is so beautiful! I really like your style. I need to read this a few more times, I love how you put words together! Thank you for sharing!awitchtryinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09626760512365562043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-27111628377862308222010-10-21T17:33:21.784+01:002010-10-21T17:33:21.784+01:00oh sleep well my friend..i enjoyed your poem..nice...oh sleep well my friend..i enjoyed your poem..nice one shotClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-87930707077189021462010-10-21T13:20:10.066+01:002010-10-21T13:20:10.066+01:00Sleep!! A hard won commodity.
I like this, and it...Sleep!! A hard won commodity.<br /><br />I like this, and it reminds me somewhat of Wordsworth. <br /><br />Beautiful and touching.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-91222951909614147482010-10-21T12:28:38.781+01:002010-10-21T12:28:38.781+01:00ear God if sleep keeps a man sane Then mad me not!...ear God if sleep keeps a man sane Then mad me not!For simply sleep is my calling...<br /><br />Great one shot!!Gabriela Abalohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11316879938383542026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-79129848518106349212010-10-21T07:45:25.966+01:002010-10-21T07:45:25.966+01:00Simple words and very interesting thoughts conveye...Simple words and very interesting thoughts conveyed.. I enjoyed reading it...<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/Shashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-90954750240550085322010-10-21T04:40:58.856+01:002010-10-21T04:40:58.856+01:00Having been past the point of exhaustion myself I ...Having been past the point of exhaustion myself I could relate! I love the picture you painted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-49321473390719840512010-10-21T04:21:27.501+01:002010-10-21T04:21:27.501+01:00I like the last stanza alot....nice to meet you at...I like the last stanza alot....nice to meet you at One Shot....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-76279149783356834912010-10-21T02:39:08.727+01:002010-10-21T02:39:08.727+01:00Very interesting the way you make his words almost...Very interesting the way you make his words almost slurred or confused as he seeks shelter. I like it.Ben Langhinrichshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-66245817846859344112010-10-21T01:41:13.022+01:002010-10-21T01:41:13.022+01:00Thanks for taking the time to read. Really apprec...Thanks for taking the time to read. Really appreciate it...so enjoying the onestoppoetry community. Been a while since I've been stretched and challenged. Hope to learn lots more from the talent on the site. <br />Stay blessedUrbanPoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13455428024315417194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-1822055436962261512010-10-21T01:16:39.879+01:002010-10-21T01:16:39.879+01:00What a delight - your poem is stated the way a man...What a delight - your poem is stated the way a man wanting sleep away form the elements would converse with the stars and the creator.<br /><br />thanks for sharing with One Shot<br /><br />just a reminder that One Shot poetry Competition will be ending on Friday (the 22nd). Would love you to submit something.<br /><br />Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-70639570350461411852010-10-21T00:40:39.801+01:002010-10-21T00:40:39.801+01:00ah. nice close....i imagine the creator will hear....ah. nice close....i imagine the creator will hear...so sleep...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25269312.post-24179650177251259432010-10-20T23:58:11.633+01:002010-10-20T23:58:11.633+01:00enjoyed your poemenjoyed your poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com